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Wednesday, February 4, 2015

I walked a crystal forest
In company of sylphs
as mist obscured the sun and sky
To the castle of the elves

A message bourne from lords of men
To beg Elandon's aid
The orcs do mass up in the hills
Maidens stolen and slayed

My allies grant me access
The silver-bound gate swings wide
I lead my mount in the fortress
My father's father's weapon beside

(to be continued)
©Kiku Koibito


21 comments:

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  2. Oh, I love this! I'm a huge LOTR geek, & this feels like the start of an ancient, secret tale we were not privy to. Especially love the father's weapon...speaks volumes!

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    1. Thank you, Cheryl. Middle Earth is vast, many tales untold. It is here an early time, when a special bond was formed between tribes of humans and elves against common enemies, and magic filled the realms.

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  3. I love stories like this! Well writen verse!

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    1. Thank you, Fractled One for your encouragement!

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  4. Exquisite work Sister. Just read your remark on G+ and now know to click the "Newer Post" button below. :-)

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  5. A story of a million years

    Nc Dawson poet

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  6. A story of a million years

    Nc Dawson poet

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  7. Thank you, +ᙅYᙖᙓᖇ ᗪOᙅ™!

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  8. Thank you, +Noel corenulis Dawson!

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  9. Always i have loved you work my friend,noe i'm anxious to read more.. Jed Wolfe

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  10. Always i have loved you work my friend,noe i'm anxious to read more.. Jed Wolfe

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  11. Oooooooooo. Your work is spell binding and significant. I anxiously await the next installment

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